domingo, 19 de julio de 2009

my last vacations

on my vacations i was enjoying with my family, i went on a trip with all my friends to the river, it was great, we had a digital camera, a insect repelent, and others things that we needed but to the end of the day i was exshauted, and sleeped all the night.
the next weekend i was with my family, my grandmother, a uncle, my mother, my two sisters, my cousin and some chidrens of the family. we carried a beach towel, swinsuits,, some snacks, sunglasses, sunblock, beach ball, and rubber ring to the childrens. my mom was all the time in a deck chair talking with my uncle and with my grandmother. part of the time i was walking at the beach, playing with my cousin to sandcastle and with the beach ball, and then i enjoyed swimming with my sisters, later we went to the restaurant and when we finished of eating then we came back at home.
on my twon the people celebrate a tradicional party. named buitragos party , where i was with my best friend and i just needed to have the tickets, a camera to take photo to the singers and a lot of friends for enjoying the party.
for the next vacations i would be a good idea meet with friends, doing exercise and things thant usually you dont do.
if you are going to the beach, you could need a sunhat, a camera and i think is a good idea to carry a lot of money and dont forget enjoy with yours friends and have a good time...............

3 comentarios:

  1. I like it!!!! good friend your compotition is great, you should make corretions in some few words. kisses

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  2. if i don´t know where is the correction than the teacher writted to mi blog. i can´t do anything

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  3. Good job.
    I am sure you are able to identify the mistakes in capitalization, punctuation and grammar.Try to organize the composition in separated paragraphs.
    Congratulations for your interest in all the activities done in class.

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